Welcome Jill!
Hello everyone! I’m so excited to be here on release day!! When I found out that Carolyn Crane used to be a cocktail
waitress, just like my heroine in The Edge of Night, I thought it was only fitting to turn her blog into
a wild n’ crazy dance bar.
So welcome to Coyote Fugly, where the drinks are cold, the
heroes are hot, and the waitresses are fast. We’ll be talking about beverages and bar scenes in romance
novels. Yep, it’s Romance Ladies’
Night! You can read excerpts, play
The Hookup Game, and enter to win a copy of my new book. Whee!!
This scene from The Edge of Night takes place at Club Suave, where the heroine
works. Once a strip joint, the
club is situated near the US-Mexico border, and it caters to a raucous
crowd. April Ortiz is struggling
to make ends meet as a college student and single mom. When one of her coworkers is found
dead, two gang unit police officers show up to interview the staff. Officer Noah Young comes back another
night to see April:
The overhead
lights clicked on, a rude glare that signaled closing time. Grumbling patrons began to shuffle out
the front entrance. April crossed
her arms over her chest, self-conscious in her cheap outfit and heavy makeup.
Noah was so
clean-cut, so handsome and sincere.
In contrast, she felt soiled, as if the grit of the club coated her
skin. Her hair probably smelled
like booze and cheap cologne.
She glanced
toward Eddie’s office. He hadn’t
said a word about Lola, but he’d donated some funds for the funeral. Perhaps his conscience was bothering
him. “I have to clear tables.”
“When do you get
off?”
“A little after
2:00.”
“Can we talk?”
April was an
expert in letting men down easy.
She received offers from customers almost every night. Some requested her phone number, or
tried to give her a friendly hug.
Others invited her to wild after-parties, hot tub socials, and hotel
room tete-a-tetes. None had
tempted her half as much as Noah.
“I’ll wait for
you in the parking lot,” he said, studying her face.
Although a
polite demurral was second nature to her, her mouth refused to form the
words. “Okay.”
He turned his
attention back to the crowd, his lips curving with satisfaction. The expression was another hint that he
wanted more than information from her.
Heart pounding,
she went behind the bar, filling a glass tumbler with ice and lemon-lime
soda. Any amount of interaction
with him was a risk. Eddie would
assume she was turning against the neighborhood, telling secrets.
Hand steady from years of practice,
she passed Noah the tumbler, watching while he took a measured sip. He didn’t seem surprised that she
remembered his preference.
She stared at
his mouth, wondering how it would taste.
Blushing, she
blinked out of her stupor, grabbing an empty tray from the bar as she walked
away. Feeling his eyes on her
backside, she added a little extra swing to her hips. Then she glanced over her shoulder, catching him looking.
He smiled, guilty
as charged. And lifted his drink,
saluting her efforts.
Laughing
breathlessly, she set her tray down and started clearing off tables.
Want more? You can read a full excerpt here.
My hero and heroine from Set
the Dark on Fire also spend time in a
bar. The Round-Up is a no-frills
dive in the backwater town of Tenaja Falls, California. Interim sheriff Luke Meza (formerly of
Las Vegas) is there to chat up the locals about a questionable mountain lion
mauling. But he can’t stop
thinking about his impulsive hookup with bad-girl wildlife biologist Shay
Phillips:
Luke watched her approach, unable
to tear his eyes away from her body.
Her faded black T-shirt was vintage Stones, the infamous image of the
wagging tongue. He knew by the way
her breasts moved beneath it that she wasn’t wearing a bra.
When she maneuvered onto the bar
stool next to him, he had to wonder if she was similarly bare under that tiny
skirt.
Sweat broke out on his forehead.
With a knowing smile, she grabbed
his bottle of Bud and took a sip.
Her hair was loose tonight, falling in sexy waves to the middle of her
back. He wanted to stick his hands
in it. Her mouth was plump and
moist and red, and when he thought about what he wanted to do tot it, his skin
overheated and his jeans got tight.
She let her lips linger on the rim
of the bottle, torturing him. “You
want to dance?”
Dance? He couldn’t even stand. “No.”
“Why are you here?” she asked
suddenly.
“Here, in this bar?”
“In this town.”
He took the bottle away from her,
plagued by dirty fantasies in which she ran her tongue up and down the
neck. “I needed a job.”
“Did you get fired?”
Luke hesitated, caught off guard by
her question.
“Las Vegas is the city of vice,”
she murmured, studying his face. “What’s
yours? You don’t strike me as a
gambler. Too uptight. And it can’t be alcohol. You’ve been nursing the same drink for
an hour.”
“Maybe it was drugs,” he said
glibly.
“Please. You’re so in love with being in control, I bet you’ve never
even tried pot.”
He shrugged, too proud to admit she
was right.
Although I’m a fan of bar scenes, most of my characters
don’t drink. Ben Fortune of Crash
Into Me is a recovering alcoholic. Shay Phillips from Set the
Dark on Fire has a nasty hangover in the
opening chapters, but she isn’t a lush.
In The Edge of Night, only
one character overindulges. The
hero’s little sister, Meghan, gets drunk at a beach bonfire and tries to catch
the attention of her cute coworker, tattooed grocery boy Eric Hernandez. That scene is a little too dark for a
release day party, and it doesn’t take place in a bar, so I didn’t include
it.
Now that you’ve met the characters, let’s play the Hookup
Game! Who’s zoomin’ who? And what’s their poison?
A
|
jungle juice
|
1
|
B
|
Bud
|
2
|
C
|
lemon-lime soda
|
3
|
Directions:
Read the post/excerpts for clues, match the heroes with the
heroines, and name the beverage from their scene. For example, if you think hero A hooks up with heroine 1
over jungle juice, your answer would be:
A-1, (character names), jungle juice.
Possible heroes/heroines: Luke Meza, Noah Young, Eric
Hernandez; Shay Phillips, April Ortiz, Meghan Young.
First person to solve the puzzle gets a copy of The Edge
of Night.
By the way, I chose these celebrities based on coloring and
hairstyle; none are a perfect likeness of the characters. Feel free to make your own mental
pictures. Someone said they
imagined Luke Meza as The Rock (Dwayne Johnson), which I thought was pretty
funny.
Don’t want to play my cool game? Fine then! I
have discussion questions:
What do you think about bar scenes, heavy drinking, or
casual hookups in romance novels?
Do you prefer squeaky-clean heroes like Noah Young? Is it okay for heroines to be flawed
and forward, like Shay Phillips?
Thanks for having me, Carolyn!!
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Thanks for stopping by, Jill!
Added: Another way to WIN: If you answer one of Jill's questions, krazy hostess Carolyn will put your name in a hat to win a copy of EDGE - anywhere in the world Book Depository ships. This contest ends Saturday.
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Thanks for stopping by, Jill!
Added: Another way to WIN: If you answer one of Jill's questions, krazy hostess Carolyn will put your name in a hat to win a copy of EDGE - anywhere in the world Book Depository ships. This contest ends Saturday.
25 comments:
That release party looks all kinds of skeery, actually. O.O
Congrats on your new release!
For the HookupGame I'm guessing:
B Lemon-lime soda 3
C Bud 1
A Jungle juice 2
Chris: LOL. Come on down! Little CJ has an idea for a fun game.
Mariee: Thanks for playing! We'll see if Judge Jill accepts your answer. As soon as she is done doing her crazy tabletop dance routine.
Coyote Fugly!! OMG the faces are priceless.
*dancing on table*
*falls off edge*
I'm okay! Wow, all that table-stomping works up a sweat! Whee.
I'll judge the entries at the end of the day. Thanks for playing Mariee.
Chris! What do you mean, skeery? The Fuglies are fabulous! Little CJ is making a voodoo doll for you.
I have seen Little CJ in the flesh (well, so to speak) and you shouldn't be taking her name lightly...
I love the flawed characters and the bar fight scenes in books ;)
Congrats on the book, looks fantastic.
Oh that looks like a par-tay.
I like the bar scenes in books especially when they get messy. I enjoy a great pile of character flaws because who wants to just read about the perfect person? The need some baggage and anger issues.
As I do not drink bar scenes can be a bit alienating, but they do not necessarily bother me. Eventually they leave the bar, or I would hope so :)
As far as characters go, the more flawed the better!
robin [at] intensewhisper [dot] com
Psssst... Jill... we whisper c.j.'s name as quitely as possible.... she has been known to haunt... and the voodoo... nothing to sneeze about....
Dottie :)
BTW... I think the fuglies are awesome... lolol
Dottie :)
Oh, and my answers for the hook up game...
1,2,1
2,3,2
3,1,3
Did I follow the instructions...? I think I need some jungle juice...
LOLOL
Dottie :)
A-2, Noah & April, lemon-lime soda
B-3, Eric & Meghan, jungle-juice
C-1, Luke & Shay, beer
More people are entering!! I wonder if anybody has gotten the quiz right....
A-2, Noah/Shay, lemon lime
B-3, Eric/Meghan, jungle juice
C-1,Luke/April, beer
Word puzzles are my weakness.
Robin K, that's funny because I don't drink and I think Carolyn doesn't either, but I thought it would be a fun theme for a party. My characters don't spend that much time in bars, actually!
I can't say if anyone has the puzzle right. There are definitely people who have it wrong.
Jill: Oh, I do drink a little, but infrequently and wimpily.
Okay, now I might do the puzzle for myself just to see... I liked your visual aid!
Happy Release Day to Jill. I'm not against bar scenes and casual hookups in books because it's realistic.
Thanks for adding another book prize, Carolyn! And thanks to everyone who stopped by to celebrate my release day!! I'm going to wait a few days to announce the winner because I'm heading off the LA. Someone did solve the puzzle. Good job, you! But feel free to keep guessing!!
When I made that Coyote Fugly pic my husband walked by and was like wtf is that? LOL.
Speaking of bar scenes, I can be found at the bar (with my Diet Coke!) or anywhere there is a party at RT. Please come say hi if you see me. That face directly under Miss Doreen belongs to me. :)
Thanks Carolyn!! Sorry to miss you at RT. Great League post today.
This is way too much thinking for a Tuesday. Let me see is I guess the hook-ups:
A-2 bud
B-3 lemon lime
C-1 jungle juice
For me, bar scenes can make me smile or cringe - depending on what specific memory I draw up at the moment of reading. But I will say, I do enjoy reading them.
I'm gonna give it a try lol.
ok this is my guess
C goes with Bud and wants to get it on with 3 lol
Mr. B goes with Jungle Juice and flirts with 1
and last A goes for a Lemon-lime soda and is making flirty eyes at 2
I hope you can understand my crazy list. To answer the question, squeaky clean is Cute but I love a girl that isn't afraid to be a little forward or a guy that knows what he wants and isn't afraid to show it. Have a fun time you two maybe drink a pina colada for me? lol
as always ♥, Carol
Bar scenes, drinking and occasional hookups in romance novels are fine. They are a part of a lot of young adult lives and while they may bring up some memories both funny and shameful, they also give an insight for those who were a bit squeaky clean. I don't particularly care for the squeaky clean hero, I'd rather see a flawed one and what they do to overcome that.
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Bar scenes and casual hookups are ok. But its really all about the HEA in the end.
Sqeaky clean heroes are ok too, but flaws make life exciting. So in that case its ok for the heroine to be flawed too.
A-2, lemon lime soda
B-1, bud
C-3, jungle juice
All the best with the release Jill!
I'm back from RT!! Went from dancing on tables to dancing on the dance floor.
The winner is Sharon!! Email me at jillsoren1@aol.com with your info.
thanks so much for playing everyone!!
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